Today I chanced to read one of my poetry books I had created and I enjoyed the memories.
It came from an assignment in a class I took. The teacher gave us each a couple lines to start our poem with and I have italicized them. We were to create a 'found poem' that expresses us, what we feel, or what we are, or something of ourselves.
Here I share it with you.
I AM
I take a path, walking
where my spirit will lead,
time and thought my surveyors;
they lay the course well.
My human heart stirs
as I contemplate the firs
robed in green-gray moss,
the murmuring pines and mossy hemlocks,
the gnarled elms with grumpy silhouettes.
Among these bending boughs I inhale
inspiration and follow my imagination.
The sunset gleams a smoldering smile
upon the horizon as loons circle
in the moth-spattered light.
Shadows of clouds upon a rivulet
change, minute by minute,
and I see my Muse whispering words into the wind.
Light pirouettes off the shore,
a mystic play of shadows,
twining and twisting as if alive.
My soul is reflected in nature,
a splinter of light in a river
that undulates through life.
Like a single snowflake, complex and delicate,
I am unique from all others.
As words uncoil like smoke
emerging from a smothered fire,
they rise leisurely out of me.
I am a chanter of pain and joy,
unifier of here and hereafter,
embroiderer of expressions,
passing on my revelations.
I let words rain down on me,
hear matchless lyrics within their flow.
The paper in memory's sketchbook is crisp,
smooth, a virgin of loveliness
expectant beneath my hand.
Words come to me, slowly, tenderly, shyly.
I am a weaver of language and dreams,
they quiver against my tremulous hands
as my fingers shift them like fine sands.
'I am'
I proclaim,
and through expression
I shall exclaim it
again and again.
Rose Lefebvre ©
Beautiful poem Rose.
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DeleteLove it
ReplyDeleteThanks Heath!
DeleteSo beautiful Rose. Thanks for sharing this with us. xoxo
ReplyDeleteThank you. I love sharing in hopes it touches someone.
DeleteSuch tender words! Love it. Kathryn
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you. Kind words.
DeleteYou have a way of weaving words together and making them sing.
ReplyDeleteYou are so sweet, Ruth. Thank you.
DeleteLovely! A couple of my favorite lines are the grumpy silhouettes and smoldering smile.
ReplyDeleteIt's one of those satisfying poems that ends so well--"sticks the landing"--which I think is so important in satisfying the reader.
Pat
Thank you, Pat. I so appreciate that you like it!
DeleteLove gnarled elms with grumpy silhouettes and your declaration of self, Rose!
ReplyDeleteThank you. Pat also liked that same part!
DeleteVery nice! Orice
ReplyDeleteThanks Orice!
ReplyDeleteRose, I have read your poem "I Am" several times now, and each reading brings its own rewards. This morning I ran across a quotation of Ursula Le Guin describing poetry as "a patterned intensity of language." A good description of your work. In addition to the beauty of the images and the language I appreciate your choice of format. The centered lines conjure the feeling of variable breezes or waves of water or, perhaps, the flow of dappled sunlight moving across the land.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing it.
Ron
So evocative!
ReplyDeleteI have always found it difficult to understand poetry, not the words but the format/rhythm, something missing in my head! but the words themselves in your beauitful poem spoke to me - moth spattered light - I like that - I could really visualise the things you conjured up - really lovely.
ReplyDeleteOh, this is lovely, Rose! You have a wonderful, descriptive way with words - they truly paint beautiful pictures. xx K
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